Goldilocks and The Three Polar Bears – An Illustrated Essay by Finlay Currid (aged 8)

Finlay Currid is aged 8, in Primary 3 and attends the Kip McGrath Education Centre in Falkirk for help with this Reading and Writing.  His teacher, Janice Rough, is so proud of the hard work and excellent progress Finlay has been making she wanted to share his latest exercise with the whole world.  We have to admit we are pretty impressed with Finlay’s story about Goldilocks the Mermaid in the Arctic Circle.  Well done Finlay!!

Please click on the first box below to read the story in full screen!

To contact the Kip McGrath Education Centre in Falkirk, you can contact Janice Rough on  01324 682077 or visit the website at www.kipmcgrath.co.uk/Falkirk.

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3 comments on “Goldilocks and The Three Polar Bears – An Illustrated Essay by Finlay Currid (aged 8)

  1. This is lovely and I am so impressed with all the brilliant punctuation! What a great idea to rewrite a well known story in a different setting. Well done Finlay!

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